Emily Swager, one of our group members, typed up this simple document, with the lyrics of our song "5 Years Time" and alongside these lyrics are notes regarding camera footage, which I shall cover in my Cinematography Treatment. These were our ideas at the start, lyrics are in black and camera notes are in Italics and in red. I got this from her Blog, the URL address for this specific 'Post' is above!
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(At the docks by himself sitting down looking at his legs looks sad - first 38secs)
Oh well in five years time we
could be walking round a zoo (high angle shot in park (establishing) to point of view in docks, walking around happy)
With the sun shining down over me and you
And there’ll be love in the bodies of the elephants too
And I’ll put my hands over your eyes, but you’ll peep through
(Rapidly cuts between two different time frames)
And there’ll be sun sun sun (them happy in the docks)
All over our bodies
And sun sun sun (switching back to him walking alone at the docks)
All down our necks
And sun sun sun (happy couple)
All over our faces
And sun sun sun (him alone)
So what the heck
Cos I’ll be laughing at all your
silly little jokes (This is set in the park playing tennis)
And we’ll be laughing about how we used to smoke
All those stupid little cigarettes, and drink stupid wine
Cos it’s what we needed to have a good time
And it was fun fun fun
When we were drinking (them happy playing tennis ball bounces then cuts to him alone)
It was fun fun fun
When we were drunk (him staring into the tennis court)
And it was fun fun fun
When we were laughing (ball bounces back to them laughing playing tennis)
It was fun fun fun
Oh it was fun (then him staring into tennis courts but we shoot him through the gate)
Oh well I look at you and say (Them playing hide and seek near the tree him hiding behind the tree)
It’s the happiest that I’ve ever been
And I’ll say I no longer feel I have to be James Dean
And she’ll say (Them running down hill happy)
Yeah well I feel all pretty happy too
And I’m always pretty happy when I’m just kicking back with you
And it’ll be (Them happy playing still running up hill)
Love love love
All through our bodies (cuts when he goes behind tree and turns)
around and cuts to him alone near the tree
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And love love love
All through our minds (happy)
And it be Love love love
All over her face (sad)
And Love love love
All over mine (sad)
Although maybe all these moments are just in my head (him lying in the road remembering times)
I’ll be thinking ‘bout them as I’m lying in bed
And all that I believe might never really come true (she walks across but like a ghost and he sees her but she just vanishes)
But in my mind I’m havin’ a pretty good time with you
Oh, In Five years time (Them in the road and they are fighting)
I might not know you
In Five years time
We might not speak
Oh, In five years time
We might not get along
In five years time,
You might just prove me wrong (we see her just vanish)
Oh there’ll be love love love (during this time is the different places that they were together: Christchurch Park, Docks - Ipswich Waterfront, and the street) of them just being happy)
Wherever you go
There’ll be love love love
Wherever you go
There’ll be love love love
Wherever you go
There’ll be love love love (by this bit you see him near the tree in Christchurch Park and him alone)
Wherever you go
There’ll be love love love
Wherever you go
There’ll be love love love
Wherever you go
There’ll be love love love (this bit he scatteres ashes and we get a still shot (?) of the ashes coming out of the jar).
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